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Creative Writing Competition (P.3)

P. 3A Trevor Chan

B. Super Jake saves the city

My name is Jake. I have a dream. I dream that I am a superdog. Suddenly, I hear somebody screaming. I fly there to see what happens. I see a girl trapped in a flat which is on fire. I fly to save her and help putting out the fire. Then I hear a boy crying. I fly to see what is going on and find his balloon is blown away. I take the balloon back to him. I fly around to see what I can help. “Oh my God!” I see four spaceships landed on a candy shop. Some aliens come out of the ships and rob the candies. I fight with them and expel them from the Earth. People cheer “Super Jake saves the city!”


P. 3A Alice Chan

B. I am a king.

My name is Jake. I have a dream. I dream that I am a king. I meet Elsa in the Iceland. I can see an ice swing made by Elsa. It is for her son. When I see the swing, I run to play on it, but when I sit on it, I fall down suddenly because the swing is broken. I am so sorry to Elsa, then I buy Elsa a fruit tart and go to her house to apologize. ‘That’s okay’ Elsa says. When I go into her house, her son disappears. Elsa is so worried. We look for him around Elsa’s house and the park in the Iceland. Originally, he is at the park playing with his friends. When he is walking, he sees a dragon and the dragon is trying to attack him. I use a magical sword to fight with the dragon and I run to save him. At the same time, Elsa uses her magic to turn the dragon into ice. ‘That’s so dangerous! The dragon wants to eat your son.’ I say. ‘Thank you, king’ Elsa says.

At last, my master Harry wakes me up by shouting at me.


P. 3A Cristal Chung

B. Jake the Dream Dog

My name is Jake. I have a dream. I dream that I am a man. My wife is May. She is at home and I am going to buy hamburgers. We live in a palace with one hundred maids.

One day, May has a stomache. She takes some medicine but she doesn’t get better. I ask her “Who can make you recuperate?

“You can make a poster and put it on a notice board.” says May. So I do what she says.

After a few days, an old man comes and gives me a magical golden flower. May eats the flower and she finds that she is pregnant.

When she is pregnant, we read stories every day and play audio that transmitting languages.

When the baby is born, he goes to learn in a local school. He is so smart and becomes the most popular doctor. One day, a man invites him to go to the space to do a spacewalk and see many stars. He shouts “I want my mummy!’ He is so embarrassed when he comes back from the space. He wouldn’t be a doctor and go to the space again.

At last, my master wakes me up with a cup of cold water.


P. 3A Heidi Kam

B. A singer

My name is Jake. I have a dream. I dream that I am a singer. In the dream, I am in the singing competition. I see many people looking at me, I feel very nervous and scared.

I can sing a pleasant song in front of the pupils. They are very surprised and excited because I am a dog but I can sing great songs. The judge comes and asks me ‘How can you sing a lovely song? Do you have magic?’ I answer

‘I don’t have magic, I just always practice,’ It is time to announce the result of the competition, I really want to know who gets the prize.

‘The winner is…….’ When the judge is saying, Peter shouts ‘Wake up, Jake! You are catching my legs! I am very painful!’ At last, I wake up and know it is just a dream. But I really want to know who the winner is.


P. 3A Terrence Lee

B. Pirate Jake’s Adventure

My name is Jake. I have a dream. I dream that I am a pirate. I’m going to Neverland now. I am on the pirate ship. The pirate ship is made of gold. It is big. It can fly. I see a lot of sea animals. The sea animals always play with us. I arrive Neverland at ten o’clock in the morning. I see my friends Donald. The fairies give us some fairy dust and we can fly. We play happily together. I talk with Donald that I have to leave. I go back to my pirate ship to have dinner. I eat a box of chicken wings. They’re yummy. Suddenly, I wake up and find that my master is cooking dinner for me. Yum!


Wilbert Chan  3B(3)

Jake the cow boy

My name is Jake. I have a dream. My dream is about being a cow boy. I’m a cow boy in U.S.A.. I ride a white horse to catch the bad guys. I wear a cow boy hat and a vest. I tell the bad guys, “Stop!” I catch them with the rope and put them to prison.

One day, a girl goes to the police office and says to me, “Hey! Jake! All the bad guys go to Heng Sang Bank!” I say, “What?” I ask all police and horses to go to the bank with me.

All the police see the bad guys on Happy Road. Police Team Eleven want to go to the bank and stop the bad guys.

They arrived at Heng Sang Bank. The bank alarm is ringing and we see two million bad guys are in the bank! I smell something and say, “What is this smell? Are they some hot dogs?” And I hear someone says, “Yes! This is the smell of hot dogs.” Suddenly, a policeman says, “Hey! What do you think? Stop them from robbing the hot dogs! I ask, “Do we have a jet?”

Suddenly, I see a jet and I drive the jet to attack the bad guys and all the police say, “Yeah! Yeah! Yeah!!” because I defeat all the bad guys!

All police go to a restaurant to eat pizza, hot dogs, chicken wings, French fries. We order three hundred and sixty-seven cans of orange juice and five hundred and fifty-eight cans of lemon tea to celebrate. All cow boys and police are happy!

Suddenly, I hear someone says, “Hey! Jake! Time to go to the park! And why are you eating your cushion and blanket?”


Toby Kwok 3B(18)

Jake the hero

My name is Jake. I have a dream. My dream is about saving a city. People call me ‘Super Jake, because I am the hero of the city. I wear a red cloak and blue tracksuit. I can fly but I can’t swim. I like cycling and listening to music.

Now, I am in the sky to patrol and protect the city. Suddenly, I hear a giant yelling. The giant is big and black. He is as hard as a stone.

The giant wants to eat people and destroy the city. I use a sword to fight with the giant.

I fight over his head to attack him. I fight with the giant for three hours.

At last, the giant dies. All people are very happy and call me hero. They give me ten packets of bones and candies. I am happy and I laugh.

Tim shouted, ‘Wake up, Jake!’ Tim is pulling my tail and says, ‘Why are you laughing? It is time to do some exercises!’


Anson Chu 3B

Pirate Jake

My name is Jake. I have a dream. My dream is about being a pirate. I am a pirate. I drive my pirate ship to rob money from other pirate ships. I feel very excited every time I sail because I can have different adventures.

I see a giant pirate ship. The ship is near and near. I fight with the pirate on that shop together. At this time, I use my magic clock which my grandfather gives me. I press the button of the magic clock. Suddenly, everything stops except my companions. We put all the enemy into a cage. I press the button again. “Why are we in the cage?” the enemies ask. I don’t answer them because it is a secret. Then we take all the pearls, gold and diamonds from them. I will be as rich as a millionaire. But the windy storm comes at this moment and my magic clock drops into the sea. The wind blows me up. Luckily, I catch the pole of the ship tightly.

Oh no! I wake up and scratch the sofa. “Jake! Jake! Wake up! Don’t scratch the sofa and throw the clock!” my master says.


Marie Chow 3B(10)

A strange day of Jake

My name is Jake. I have a dream. My dream is about having a strange day. One day, I go for a walk. I go into a tunnel and I see a magic door in the tunnel. I open the door and go inside. Then the door disappears.

I touch a magic stone and the stone becomes an apple pie. I am attracted by the smell. I taste a bite of it. Then, I become small and at the same time I hear a giant yelling loudly, “Who are you?” I feel scared because now I am as small as a mouse.

I run as fast as I can. “Help,” I said. Suddenly, a flower witch asks me, “Where do you want to go?” I say, “I want to go home.”

The flower witch gives me a magical flower. I smell the magical flower. I become bigger and the flower becomes a sword. I fight with the giant. At last, the giant pinches my nose. My master Lulu makes me up by pinching my nose. I feel very painful. I have a terrible dream.


3C Howard Ho

If I were a cat

My name is Jake. I have a dream. My dream is about how I become a cat. I am sleeping on the sofa. I see my owner and I want to talk to him. I hear ‘Meow.’ He gives me some milk. I love sleeping. I don’t want to go out. I become lazy and dirty. I drink the milk and I think it is yummy. Suddenly, I wake up from my dream. My owner shakes me and calls me to eat lunch.


P. 3C Hayley Leung

A prince dog

My name is Jake. I have a dream. My dream is about I become a prince dog. I live in a beautiful castle. Suddenly, I hear the beautiful princess shouts out loud. ‘Help! Help!’ I see a monster is attacking the princess. I feel angry and I go to save her. I fight with the monster and finally it lost. ‘Don’t hurt me.’ says the monster. Suddenly, my master wakes me up for dinner.


3C Vanessa Leung

A superdog

My name is Jake. I have a dream. My dream is about a superdog. I am a superdog in my dream. I am in a tropical rain forest. I see a monster. It runs after me and wants to eat me. I shout and run quickly. I see a lot of bananas in the tree. I get some bananas to eat. I throw the banana skins on the ground. The monster falls down because of the banana skins. Then all of the bananas fall on the ground. Tom wakes me up by kicking my leg.


Heather

Dream title “ A super famous star.”

My name is Jake. I have a dream. My dream is about a super famous star. I am on the stage in the dream. I see a lot of audiences. They are very happy. I am singing and dancing on the stage. After that, I talk with my fans and say thanks to them for the gifts. At the end I fall off the stage and become a pig. Finally, my master wakes me up by kissing my forehead.


Elise Chu

Dream title “ Superdog and the princess”

My name is Jake. I have a dream. My dream is about the princess and me. We are in the country park. We have a picnic there. We have good food. The beautiful princess tastes the cake. It is sweet. I taste the chocolate bone. It is hard. Next, we see and smell a magical flower. It is beautiful. We can fly. And we fly a kite there. This is fun!

Suddenly, a dragon flies over the sky. It is big. The dragon says, ‘ I am hungry, I want to eat you.’ It catches the princess. The princess says, Jake, help me.’ Then I turn into a superdog because of the power of the magical flower.

Finally, the dragon is hurt. It flies back to the sky. I’m winning! The princess says, “you save my like, thank you so much!” The princess kisses my face. I am very happy. When I open my eyes, I see my mum. She is kissing my forehead. This is a great dream for me!


Alvin Yeung

Dream title “ The dinosaur and me”

 

My name is Jake. I have a dream. My dream is about a superdog. I am in a spaceship. There is a dinosaur. It tries to storm into our spaceship. It is very cunning and catches my mum. My Dad says “Don’t eat my sife!” I hear the dinosaur yelling. I see a magic stone floating in the space. I fly to touch it and it strengthens my power. Now I can fight with the dinosaur and save my mum.

However, it swallows something and fires on me. I am burnt on fire. I touch the magic stone again. I fight the dinosaur and wins. Oh! Dad wakes me up by kicking my leg.


Superdog saves the world

My name is Jake. I have a dream. My dream is about me saving the world.

One day, when I fly over New York City, I hear some people screaming and they say, ‘Aliens, run away!’ And I see a spaceship in the sky. There are some aliens in the spaceship. They look like frogs and they are green. They have big eyes and long fingers. Then some laser beam comes out from the spaceship. I fly quickly to the spaceship and shout, ‘Stop! Don’ shoot the people.’ The aliens smile and say, ‘We are not shooting people. We are scanning the city. We lost our baby alien. Please help us.’ Then I order all the dogs in the city to find the baby alien.

Finally we find the baby alien in a toy shop. It is playing with a toy car. The baby alien goes back to the spaceship. The aliens say, ‘Thank you, superdog and bye.’ Then the spaceship flies away and all the people in the city say happily, ‘Superdog, you save the world.’ Then, I hear my master says, ‘Wake up. It’s time for lunch.’

3E Lui Ho Yin, Anson


Super Jake saves the world

My name is Jake. I have a dream. My dream is about Super Jake saving the city.

In the city, there is a superdog called Jake. You don’t need to guess who Jake is because I am Jake. I need to look around the city every day as I need to ensure that the city I and people live is safe and peaceful.

            ‘Well, today is also a peaceful day. I can enjoy my relaxing afternoon!’ I say.

Suddenly, there is a loud noise.

            ‘Wow! Wow! Wow…’ ‘Oh my god! There is a big big monster! Oh! My relaxing afternoon!’ I say. Since there is a monster, so I need to go to have a fight with him! ‘Look at my fire!’ I say to the monster. ‘Woo…’ the monster yells. After twenty minutes, the monster dies and I win. ‘I am a super hero! Ha! Ha!’ I say.

Then, the city becomes peaceful again and everything is back to normal.

‘Ring! Ring! Ring!’ Suddenly, an alarm clock rings near my ears.

‘Ah!’ I yell.

‘Jake, wake up! It’s time for your dinner! Do not sleep anymore,’ my master says to me.

‘What a wonderful dream!’ I think.

3E Chan Po Wun, Ella


Jake becomes a super famous sports dog

My name is Jake. I have a dream. My dream is about being a super famous sports dog. I become a well-known basketball player Yao Ming. I am about two hundred and thirty centimeters tall. I am as tall as a door!

            In my dream, I am playing a match with my idol Michael Jordan. I am in the NBA league and I am the leader of my team. In the match, I run very fast and score many points for my team. My fans in the basketball court cheer for me.

            Suddenly, Michael Jordan is walking to me and says, ‘Wake up, Jake!’ Oh! It’s not Michael Jordan. It’s Tom. And I find that I’m still on my bed.

3E Wong Nga Ham, Kelly


Jake the cow boy

            My name is Jake. I have a dream. My dream is about being a cow boy and I am in a bar of the Wild West.

‘Lemonade, please,’ I say and when I am enjoying the lemonade, I see some thieves riding to the town on their horses. When I go out of the bar, I ride on my horse to chase the thieves.

One of the thieves goes to a house. One of the thieves goes to a bank. The rest of the thieves go to the sheriff’s house. I take my gun and shoot them. Bang! ‘One down, four to go,’ I say to myself and I ride to the bank. Bang! ‘Three more to go.’

I ride to the sheriff’s house and I say, ‘Hey! One of you come out and fight with me!’ ‘OK!’ says the thief and bang! ‘Three down, two to go!’ The thieves want to run away. I use my rope to catch them.

‘All of you are down!’ I say.

‘Thanks a lot, Jake’ says the sheriff.

3E Lam Chung Hin, Chris